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The Elements by =BobSmith006:iconBobSmith006:

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Water -
     solemn, wise, worrying;
     always sees the negative side;
     A lonely observer.

Fire -
     quick, hateful, overbearing;
     always willing to start fights;
     A power struggle with others.

Earth -
     strong, gentle, loving;
     always there to lean on;
     A silent protector.

Wind -
     funny, obnoxious, laughing;
     always provides comical stabs;
     An excellent entertainer.
©2007-2009 =BobSmith006
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I thought it'd be fun to describe each element (sorry, light and dark aren't elements in my book) by considering their attributes and how they are portrayed through various stories and games.

This is the final list. Can you see the style it was written in?
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~NoahKai:iconNoahKai: May 29, 2007, 3:27:50 PM
Haiku right?

It's not bad, good job on this one.
~tatoes:icontatoes: May 29, 2007, 4:28:56 PM
nice.....very......poetic.......lol

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-- -- A Wolf Like Me -- --
(I'v been sleeping with ghosts)

This is the end of everything
goodbye my only
i hang my head and i give in
goodbye my everything
=BobSmith006:iconBobSmith006: May 29, 2007, 4:41:00 PM
I try. =D

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Ne me détestez pas parce que je suis beau et que je parle français. =D
--Si vous pouviez lire le Français, vous pourriez comprendre ceci!
----Parlez Français et soyez le meilleur.

=BobSmith006:iconBobSmith006: May 29, 2007, 4:42:17 PM
I don't think it's a haiku. I just kinda made it up as I went along.

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Ne me détestez pas parce que je suis beau et que je parle français. =D
--Si vous pouviez lire le Français, vous pourriez comprendre ceci!
----Parlez Français et soyez le meilleur.

~HyperCanaryFairy:iconHyperCanaryFairy: May 30, 2007, 1:03:29 PM
wicked! :hug:

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96% of teens and college students won't stand up for God. Put this on your page/signature if your one of the 4% who will
I believe in Jesus Christ as my Saviour. If you do too and aren't scared to admit it, then copy and paste this in your signature
~tatoes:icontatoes: May 30, 2007, 7:03:47 PM
ha ha ha i know you do!!!!! its very good.....for a TRY lol

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-- -- A Wolf Like Me -- --
(I'v been sleeping with ghosts)

This is the end of everything
goodbye my only
i hang my head and i give in
goodbye my everything
~lifeissuchalie:iconlifeissuchalie: Feb 24, 2008, 3:53:23 PM
awsome!
hey do yer zodiac signs go with this?

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When you assume you make and ass out of you and me
=BobSmith006:iconBobSmith006: Feb 24, 2008, 4:55:51 PM
No, not really. ^^; I was just thinking of typical descriptions for these elements.

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Ne me détestez pas parce que je suis beau et que je parle français. =D
--Si vous pouviez lire le Français, vous pourriez comprendre ceci!
----Parlez Français et soyez le meilleur.

~lifeissuchalie:iconlifeissuchalie: Feb 24, 2008, 5:46:16 PM
ok!
just wanderin!
:D

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When you assume you make and ass out of you and me
~Dirkotronic:iconDirkotronic: May 2, 2008, 12:22:26 PM
This is really creepy.. I totally can compare myself to the description of 'water'.

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Oh-my-lala, c'est Dirk.
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